Narrative Writing

.Narrative Writing.
Once upon a time there were four little boys named Billie Jim jack and Thomas and Axle. and so their life was a sad sad tale to say.


As we go across space and time! We look down at this boys and for they had got kicked out  of their own home with no
Water or food all they had was each other.
For yet the first one cried we are going to die out here!
The second one wailed we'll be eaten alive by bears, the third said we´ll be eaten by witches with carrots!
The fourth said we´ll have to survive on our own OK. we´ll have to find our own  water and food.



As they adventure across the Unknown and dark swampy lands they found hope and survival. oh look a mushroom! great let's find some more! Billie and I will go find water and axle and jack go and find food OK OK they replied. For they had not known what trouble they were about to be in!
As they struggled to survive out in the foggy murky woods they were spotted by some nasty witches run! They cried for help as they ran and ran into a....


Horse?! And they ran behind the horse and a knight on the horse said who are you? He said in a dark and creepy voice and then he grabbed his sword and sliced the witches and then the brave said hop in if you want to live.


As they hopped on the horse they were riding into a kingdom of knights and the little boy whispered I think we will be safe here in this kingdom:)
Then as they passed by many markets they were at the biggest and coolest place as the knight held them by the reist they were thrown down at the knees of the emperor of the 9 kingdoms!




And the boys begged for safety and a home and yet all the king said…
Throw these animals in the dungeon
Wait what's a dungeon and before their eyes they were in a home. Well where rats lived.
And as they were crunching on bones wherever they had stepped they what do you think happened to all the creatures on this sticky miserable floor!
Then they heard a huge rrrrrraaahhhhhh!...    the breath of a monster. as the little boys cried Help! they tried to open the door but the door was shut rock solid and then axle held his hand and there were keys?.



Where did you get that? No time for questions lets go! as The gate opened the monster was thumping his way over and the boys had just opened the door but! The monster got Billie and jack quickly grabbed a rock and threw it and the giant hand that was creeping towards them!.


 Billie was free and they raced to shut the door and then they sprinted down the stone walls into a room and then they said well I think we are safe now?! As they caught their breath one said don't jinx it as soon they were caught by this soldier he lifted his  helmet up said come with me we have business to attend to!