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Friday, 25 October 2019

What I did in the holidays Chapter 1 The most interesting thing I did in the holidays was… Going to my grandparents in Gore. So before I can tell you that story I ́ll tell this story… I was at home getting ready to go Gore, where my grandparents live. My dad came in and called out “Go get the scooters” as if he was angry [sort of was]. “Ok then” I shouted back at him. I got the scooters with my sister and brother and that's it really. So from then on I was getting the bags and my sister came and said, “Where are the phones? Do want them or not?” “Yeah yeah” I said in a grumpy low voice. Chapter 2 A While later I was getting in my Dad's car and then my dad comes to me says do you have everything ready yes I do dad. [ My dad was a bit sad for us leaving ] so we got in the car and ticking off our checklist and we have everything yes! Joy shouted at the top of her voice joy shhh I said in a quiet very low grumpy rumbly voice. [ I know I'm using voice a lot sorry ] So then on we were on our way to the bus stop and then my dad said that it was 10 hours! On the bus so then remembered that its 10 hours on the bus! [ SOOOOOO boring! ] yeah now you know why we have the phones? Yeah that's why we have the phones To be continued...

1 comment:

  1. Hi Makkus i like your blog post it has lot´s of detail. It sounds like you were excited to see your see your grandparents. Next time you make a post
    you should go over your writhing and check there aren't random capitals in your writing. Did you have fun at your grandparents house?

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